Friday Flash Fiction 55

22 09 2006

Her’s my latest attempt, it’s not particularly cheery, but I was inspired by something I read this week.

As usual the rules are:

Write a fictional story in 55 words with at leats one main character and a plot.

See Susie and let her know you’re playing.

Inner Beauty:

That’s the way you’re built my father said, but I can change.

I have moved to a higher plateau, I have control and discipline.

I’m free and feeling powerful.

Power produces desire, the weak have none.

Those that cannot see it are truly blind, or will not see it…

and they call anorexia a disease

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4 responses

22 09 2006
Susie

Wow, that was intense 55! I think you did just fine! THanks for playing!

23 09 2006
Scaramouche Jones

A bit scarey though :(

24 09 2006
snavy

Wow! Very intense.

25 09 2006
lily

It’s very scary… especially when you have a daughter. I was never able to starve myself… I enjoy eating way… WAY too much.

Hope you had a nice weekend Godzilla!

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